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The thunder roared like a lion hunting.
Ship wrecking like a hammer breaking a cupboard
Rocks hitting like a meteor wrecking buildings
Wind hit like a tsunami
That lightning was vicious Like a meteor hitting the ship
4 things that could happen in your story
Storm
Island
treasure
Build
War
Upgrade
Volcano eruption during war
My crew saves me
Intro who where when
The thunder roared like a lion hunting. It was the wind that was like a tsunami hitting the pirate ship. Me
and my crew kept on moving side to side. Rocks hit like a meteor on to our ship. Our ship breaking
into pieces like glass. That lighting was very very vicious, and horrific. We had to go as soon as
possible.
and my crew kept on moving side to side. Rocks hit like a meteor on to our ship. Our ship breaking
into pieces like glass. That lighting was very very vicious, and horrific. We had to go as soon as
possible.
I was flying of the ark. When I quickly grabbed onto the side of the ark, then I looked into the raging
dark sea. There was a monster facing towards me. The wind blew harder and harder every second that
past by. The ark broke into pieces. Then CRASH! It crashed into tiny and large rocks.
dark sea. There was a monster facing towards me. The wind blew harder and harder every second that
past by. The ark broke into pieces. Then CRASH! It crashed into tiny and large rocks.
“Intriguing” I said
I sprinted to the exit of the ark, then jumped of the exit (since there were no ladders
or stairs to go down.
“OOF” I fell down and hit my head.
or stairs to go down.
“OOF” I fell down and hit my head.
I looked around the island and found treasure.
“I will find this treasure”
I found the treasure. The treasure were only just bricks and light and torches.
It did take a long time though.
It did take a long time though.
Pirate war great. It was the worst time. The war was when pirate and there crews
would fight and i'm alone.
would fight and i'm alone.
“huh” I sighed.
I had to upgrade now. Now I upgraded with
machine gunned canons, lasers machines and more.
machine gunned canons, lasers machines and more.
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