Friday, 12 April 2019

Narrative Picture Prompt 1

Hello, today I am going to be showing you about my Narrative Picture Prompt. Our teacher shared this document. She gave us a Picture and we had to write a story that was made up

Here it goes


Descriptive words and phrases


The thunder roared like a lion hunting.
Ship wrecking like a hammer breaking a cupboard
Rocks hitting like a meteor wrecking buildings
Wind hit like a tsunami
That lightning was vicious Like a meteor hitting the ship
4 things that could happen in your story
Storm
Island
treasure
Build
War
Upgrade
Volcano eruption during war
My crew saves me


Intro who where when
The thunder roared like a lion hunting. It was the wind that was like a tsunami hitting the pirate ship. Me
and my crew kept on moving side to side. Rocks hit like a meteor on to our ship. Our ship breaking
into pieces like glass. That lighting was very very vicious, and horrific. We had to go as soon as
possible.


I was flying of the  ark. When I quickly grabbed onto the side of the ark,  then I looked into the raging
dark sea. There was a monster facing towards me.  The wind blew harder and harder every second that
past by. The ark broke into pieces. Then CRASH! It crashed into tiny and large rocks.
“Intriguing” I said
I sprinted to the exit of the ark, then jumped of the exit (since there were no ladders
or stairs to go down.
“OOF” I fell down and hit my head.
I looked around the island and found treasure.
“I will find this treasure”
I found the treasure. The treasure were only just bricks and light and torches.
It did take a long time though.


Pirate war great. It was the worst time. The war was when pirate and there crews 
would fight and i'm alone.
“huh” I sighed.
I had to upgrade now. Now I upgraded with
machine gunned canons, lasers machines and more.




Thank you for reading this blog post. It took a long time to write this story, please
rate it and feel free to comment. Bye bye

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